compare two camps

      Do you ever heard about camp? You should've heard about camp, of course. Then now what kind of camp do you want to go? I would like to go to the camp where I experience many things. Because I would not have times to experience when get grown up. So I should always go to the the camp where I could experience many things. But think about a camp with hundreds of homeworks and lessons, would you want to go to that awful camp? No, I don't think so. But if you just play in the camp, it wouldn't  make any
 sense. Now I will compare the two camp, first camp is a camp just study(big apple), second camp is a camp that we could play and exprience better(west ranch).
      Firstly, I will defind two camps. Big apple is a camp that you study about math, science, and all other subjects. And west ranch camp is a camp that exprience many interesting activities and learn about history about the other country. Now the similities of these two camp is firstly, you are going to study English for the main. And secondly, you will have a new interest exprience. Now thirdly, you could live with your friends in many days. Now these are the similties of these two camps.
     Secondly, I will talk about the differents of these two camps. Before I talk about the differents, what camp do you think its better? Now I think that west ranch camp is better, because I like exprience new things. Now I will talk about differents. Firstly, west ranch camp is going to another country but big apple does not go to different country. Secondly, west ranch is longer than big apple, big apple is too short. Now thirdly, is west ranch I could exprience more sports and activities. Now  what camp do you like better? I bet you would like west ranch better.
     In conclusion, I'd talk about, in first paragraph a similiteries, and in the second paragraph a differents. there are more example than these such as in differents there could be talking with Americans. Now let me ask you again do you like west ranch better? I bet you guy will say yes. I've been to many camp but I thought experience more is better I think